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Lin Had A Solution !

INDIMAG's Katha Sagar Contest's Lin Had A Solution

Lin & Liu were staring blankly, out the wide kitchen window with the frail timberwork which gave a broad view of their back yard and beyond. Farther beyond the peony shrubs that lined their courtyard Liu could see the vast expanse of the empty patch of land under dispute between two feudal lords in Guangzhou (Canton). Both weren’t living anymore and the land still lay waiting to be claimed by the legal heir. There the tall silk wool tree still stood bare, tall, spiny, cold and would continue to stand so until spring. Not a single of those beautiful, vibrant, red and orange 5 petal flowers with the white silky-cotton inside, in sight. The elegant emblem of Guangzhou was still to bloom! She feels one with the tree, devoid of emotion, standing solitary in its own steed, on a no man’s land but she never mentions this to her younger sister.

Most of the Chao Chan family members hadn’t survived the war and neither had their own ancestral home in Fujian. Their father, their brothers had all marched away into oblivion, never to come back. What had come back, in 1937, was the news that the Japanese had trampled all of them in the heartland of China! Their mother did not live for very many days after, leaving 6 year old Liu behind, lost and lonely, nursing a 16 month old, Lin.

Lin watched her sister’s face from the corner of her eyes. Light seeping through the louvers in the top ventilators of the window was banding her face. Her teenage mind started imagining it as the war-paint Liu might have used to ready herself for combat with their oncoming enemies. 10 years after the establishment of the People’s Republic of China, they were slowly recovering from their financial, moral as well as psychological set back.

Lin noticed that Liu’s eyes had that steady, staring look in them again. Liu’s face would assume a wooden look only at times of grave impending trouble. She was otherwise a very kind and amicable person to be with. Today, Lin was sure that the collective memories, emotions & turmoil of the past were surfacing which Liu was trying to conceal behind those steady eyes. Lin had never seen Liu shed a single tear that could give away the deepest feelings that she might have felt. Liu had always maintained her composure, coolly tackling all the hardships that came their way and Lin remained a silent spectator, not allowed to be party to any kind of suffering.

She was brought out of her reverie by Liu’s hands, now working again, mechanically chopping the meat on the butcher’s island with a huge, sharp knife in their kitchen.

“I don’t want your complaints. I want your solution!” Liu had sternly reprimanded Lin without looking up, regretting it later.

The sisters were now pondering again over the calamity that was to visit them today, predicted a week ago! Lin knew it was time for her to do something.

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Silver stream village was a picturesque site, kissing the foot of the mountainous range and a small but melodious waterfall streamed down its western side. The front porch of their maternal Uncle Chou Yang’s one florid, dilapidated ancestral home was often sprinkled by the clear water from the stream. Uncle had escaped to Hong Kong after bringing Liu and Lin to reside here, in 1951.

With the help of some elderly neighbors, as soon as she’d arrived, Liu had revived their ancestral business. Cha Dao, the art of making tea, ran deep in her blood. After all, generations and generations of her family were at the center of the massive tea trade that existed between China and Europe during the 19th century. Liu set up her own Lingnan Tea house aptly named after the colonial quarter of Guangzhou it was located at. And four years later it was hustling and bustling with patrons all through the day. 1955 was a very good year for Peurh, aged tea and Liu was expecting tremendous business.

On the wall facing the doorway she hung a paper scroll on which was a Tang poem written by Lin in her long, slender, slanting, calligraphic hand that said “…after one bowl, your throat is soothed. After two, loneliness and boredom are thrown out. After three, you search your bowel and discover five thousand volumes of poetry & literature. After four bowls, a light sweat will break out and all of life’s despair will seem to disappear through your pores. After five bowls, the muscles and bones are cleansed. After six bowls, you will communicate with the spirits. Be aware of the seventh bowl, you may grow wings and rise on the wind…”

“Is this communication with the spirits drawing the Cantonese to our tea house?” Liu wondered in proud admiration.

Her personal favourite was the Red Heart Ti Kuan Yin Tea, considered the mother of all Oolongs. One king had done justice to the tea by describing it as heavy as iron and as beautiful as Kuan Yin, The Goddess of Mercy and thus the name was given. This year’s tea was not tightly rolled and that meant after the first two brews, the toasty roasted flavour with the rich bready notes would completely open up, giving a warm aroma, bright taste and a comforting feeling to the patron. Liu particularly felt that notes of honey lingered on after the tea was set to brew and there was also an unmistakable soft and heady scent in the air like that of red roses on a hot summer day!

“This tea will definitely elicit romance!” she had giggled to herself unaware that the same magic of the tea leaves would spell trouble for the sisters the next day!

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The teahouse seemed like a tranquil oasis that morning! The quaint Bamboo furniture and the tinkling sound from the waters of the small fountain placed near the South window, added to the serene and peaceful ambience.
Liu looked on as Lin served at a table with a sharply acquired skill and artistry. She had selected the White Needle tea and was treating and old customer to cup after cup of the superbly made tea. The full fragrance was wafting across to her and the sweet notes of the white tea were evidently satiating him.

Lin carefully picked up the covered Gaiwan, the tea caddy, on its plate with the left hand and placed it on the up-turned fingers of her right hand. The lid was positioned slightly askew and held in place with the thumb, just enough to allow the tea to pour out while retaining the leaves. The tea was then lovingly poured from the pitcher into individual, tiny, tasting cups. Lin was sure to be attentive enough and refilled it when emptied. The Indian guest who accompanied the old man was happily observing and unable to contain his awe exclaimed, “Its amazing! There’s neither a timer nor a water thermometer employed and yet each cup has the amazing consistency of the one prior. It’s simple, graceful perfection at its unparalleled best!”

At that very moment of exhilaration entered he, who Lin & Liu would dread later. After being dutifully served a series of cups of Ti Kuan Yin Tea by Liu,

“Yum Cha, the culture of tea drinking, runs deep in my veins.” boasted Ming Hsien.
“We complement each other so well, Liu. What a handsome suitor I make!” he’d declared to Liu proclaiming his infatuation for her!

The haughty, stout man seated before her seemed to be in his late 30’s and was laden with Jade ornaments, strongly reminding her of the malicious feudal lords. His eyes didn’t laugh when he flashed that toothy smile. A fear gripped Liu’s heart at the sight of this admirer because he looked as if he was faking it. The very first feeling at his appearance was that of instant abhorrence and she couldn’t fight it at all. Even Lin had mentioned later that she couldn’t imagine her demure, petite sister standing besides the husky man at the betrothal ceremony.

“His receding hairline makes it worse to imagine!” Lin had bitterly observed.

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Tea Ceremony

Ming Hsien had not only proposed love but had also issued a death threat after sensing probability of rejection from Liu. His fiery eyes clearly said that he meant every word he’d spoken. Each word of love was as sweet as nectar but each word of retribution also dripped venom.
Before leaving the tea house he menacingly slammed two freshly minted, coffee coloured, 20 Yuan bills on her cashier’s table, promising to return the same day, same time, next week!
Money meant nothing to Liu but their safety did!

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A week of worrying and despair had gone by. He was to arrive again today!

Lin knew she could help her sister. She watched her chopping away at the meat randomly. Liu’s mind was elsewhere. She was obviously bothered by the abominable proposal.

Meanwhile Liu was searching for a specific reason to refuse, she knew that turning him down would mean another term of loneliness besides the threat to their lives. “He’s definitely not the one!” Liu had finally, bravely decided.
” I have a solution!” offered Lin, trying to sound as convincing as possible. Liu looked up in an instant, searching her younger sister’s face for an explanation.
“Don’t ask me how but I will send him away. You just wait and watch!”

When Ming Hsien entered the Lingnan Tea House punctually, Lin and the tea house staff were surprisingly welcoming him. He was astonished at the hospitality and almost celebrated this obvious favorable change of mind, with Liu.

He was ceremoniously led to where the lissome beauty was seated before a table in the choicest corner of the tea house that granted a fantastic view of the buildings surroundings. Hsien studied her face, searching for any trace of the bitter hatred he’d seen in her eyes the last time he’d voiced his emotions. Liu had not a clue about Lin’s grand plan but was playing along for she trusted her intelligence.
Soon Lin appeared from within, bearing a pot of tea on a tray which she proclaimed had been specially brewed for the prospective couple to partake.

” Let us pray to the great Kuan Yin, before you share the Tisane, tea. However, I warn you xiānsheng (mister) that the spirit of the tea will tell you how your future together will be. That’s the power of the goddess of the Oolong & Peurh!” Lin declared in a formidable tone that would display her immense knowledge of the magic of brewing.

Liu had been warned not to drink the tea. The gullible Hsien, very religious at heart however promptly gulped down Lin’s message and the first cup of the magical tea placed before him. No sooner had the first swig traveled down his throat than his face contorted to look like a dried prune.
He sprung from his seat like a jack-in-the box, shaking his head in mixed feelings of dismay and disbelief; he headed for the exit without another word to Liu. When he halted at the door, Lin feared the worst. Would he turn back? Had he realized she’d pulled a trick? He however only turned for one last glimpse of the kneeling, immensely beautiful Liu and disappeared around the bend.

Liu could not control her emotions. For the first time, tears rolled down her cheeks, blazing a red path on the fair skin. She wrapped her arms around Lin out of relief, gratitude and the immense amount of love she felt for her.

“…But what magic did you do, Lin?” inquired Liu.

” It was Che Dang (very bitter tea), dear Liu. Three pearls of the Ilex leaves must have made such a bitter brew that he ran away in fear of a future likewise!”

The sisters hadn’t enjoyed such a hearty laugh in ages!

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vibhuti

The author is a professionally qualified commercial artist and an experienced English Copy & Content writer from the Advt' world in Pune. Other interests being photography, ornithology, philately, numismatics, painting & journalism. Relatively new to the blogosphere, she is passionate about blogging, especially short story writing.

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  • vikramkarve
    Congratulations, Vibhuti. You write very well.
    I really liked this story and enjoyed reading it.
    A deserving winner. May your creative writing talent flourish.
    All the Best. Keep Writing.
    Regards
    Vikram
  • vikramkarve
    Congratulations, Vibhuti. You write very well.
    I really liked this story and enjoyed reading it.
    A deserving winner. May your creative writing talent flourish.
    All the Best. Keep Writing.
    Regards
    Vikram
  • Very interesting story.
  • Thankyou so much Shail and TF..:)
  • I was so engrossed in the Tea and the story ended. Good one.
  • Wow! Am flattered that you liked the Tea as well..glad that you are not hung up on pegs only! LOL..Jokes apart..Thanks a ton for taking the time to read and complement my stories..:)
    Do feel free to visit my blog at http://klishmaklaver.blogspot.com/ and review more of my works!
  • Oh come on Vibhuti, every drink has its timing...
  • Very nice. Really liked this one. The story comes alive and feels very realistic.
  • HI TF,
    Thanks again for your complements..:)
  • wonderful! :)
  • Thanks Mehak
  • this was such a LOVELY story! It was so innocent, and so magical!!! simply superb!
  • Thankyou Sumanaseshasayeekhan,
    Am glad you liked it too...I tried to weave a simple one this time..guess its worked! :)
  • Excellent, Vibhuti. It's seven o'clock in the morning, and you just served me a nice cup of tea. :)
    Narration wise, this is your best so far. The hard work that has gone into weaving this story is easily conspicuous. Very neatly crafted. I enjoyed it very much. It was very refreshing indeed. :)
  • Hi Karthik,
    You couldn't say 'Wah Taj!' this time, it was Chinese! :P
    Have you been reading my blog? Am so happy to know that you think am doing better.
    I try to, you know!
    Thanks a ton for the complements and do feel free to give me some constructive criticism in the future again...
  • Sid
    Marvelous. Ok. I can have it one more time. Marvelous. Splendid. Spellbound. The story is a piece of gem ya... too good.

    The way it flows and its refreshing with a positive message into it. You are a fan of law of attraction i see...:)

    Good one.
  • Glad you joined us at the tea house! ;)
    Am accepting all the praises with a bow..I dont get such flattering ones all the time yo u know..hehehe..Thanks a ton!
  • Sid
    Arey its perfect... hoping to see more like them on ur blog...:D
  • barnali
    Dear Vibhuti,

    Your story is like a sip of some refreshing green tea. It is undoubtedly one of the best stories in Indimag. You are a great writer. Keep it up. Can you give me your blog link? I would love to read your thoughts.

    Barnali
  • Hey Barnali,am happy to know you relished my story.And you've called it one of the best here...My Lord! Am an amateur writer and to receive such complements is a thrill...Thanks a ton...PLease do feel free to visit my blog and criticise my work too...WIll look forward to hearing from you...http://klishmaklaver.blogspot.com/
  • That's a beauty. Loved it. It's simplicity and it's smooth flow drew me in and kept it up till the end. The tea ceremony rituals and the 1-7 cups explained in a poem were nice nuances. I agree with both Madhu and Nishith. A very nice story Vibhuti.
  • WOW Maya Thankyou so much! You people are sending me floating on cloud 9. Such kind words of appreciation from you, Madhu & Nishith will keep me writing more..Hope you enjoy my work in the future too...:)
  • Nashsingh
    What a story, great! It sure was very refreshing as Madhu said almost like the tea.
    Excellent grammar and flow and presentation. Great overall appeal!

    Looking forward to your next. This story is certainly going to make it!
    regards
  • Hi Nishith,
    AM elated to know you found the story rejuvenating as well. Thanks for your wishes and I will try to post another ASAP...
  • Hi Madhu, Thanks a ton for the wonderful review of my story. Your complements are treasured. Am humbled to know that my simple narration has come any close to reminding you of Panchatantra and chandamama tales...:D I couldn't be happier!
  • Vibhuti,
    That was refreshing ; like the 'seventh bowl' prescribed by the Tang poem. Beautiful, elegant, flowed like silk and offered a window into the famed traditional orient tea ceremonies and a life in war torn China. The simple story reminded me of our very own fables in a panchatantra or a chandamama that convey the point so well without a grandstand.

    Nothing stood out bad grammar or typos wise, but the goodness of the story on the other hand stood out ; you know your craft Vibhuti.

    Beautiful through and through.
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