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A Valiant Bird’s Tale

Vulture Indian Mythology

As I lay motionless on the ground, the summer heat baked the earth.  A gust whipped up the powderous earth into a cloud of dust. There was no one in the wide expanse and I could see for miles.  As I lay in embrace of the Earth, the primal colors of my land kept me company — the red of the baked Earth that contrasted with the pristine blue sky and the greenery of a lush forest on the horizon.

As I wandered in and out of consciousness, I tried hard to keep myself awake.

I stared at my severed wings that lay strewn at a distance with the now loose feathers flying around it. It bore a mute testament to the happenings earlier ..

It was a normal day like any other. I was perched atop my vantage point that overlooked the vast plains of the Vindhyas. I soared into the skies with my mighty wings and patrolled my land. Though old, for a bird my age, I was in a very good shape.  Just when I was about to wrap up and head home,   something caught my eye.

I swerved and headed straight for it..

Even from a distance it was unmistakable ; it was a man. Man and his greed know no bounds and this was a demon of a man trying to make away with a friend’s little one. I was not going to let that happen..

Talons bared and a shrill cry in tow, I swooped down on the perpetrator and took a swipe. My anger and tenacity surprised the monster.

He pulled out a weapon and started slashing at me. I did him great harm but he could withstand all of it.

This demon needed more.

I had to throw caution to the wind. The situation demanded it and it was my duty..

I dove for the final assault and went straight for his face. My talons gripped his face and he began to wince in pain.

I was succeeding. As I tightened my grip, blinded with pain, he slashed at me blindly. One of those random slashes went right through my shoulder clipping a wing off my body. More followed..

I reeled and started a downward spiral….

The pain was unbearable. Not the physical one, but the one in the eyes of this monster’s captor who he was now making away with. I said a silent prayer as I hit the ground.

It could have been a few hours since.  I wondered why providence kept me awake and alive ? I obliged anyway. Everything happens for a reason..

The heat showed no signs of abating and the cloudless sky ensured it didn’t.  As I lay helpless, I was reminded of the last time I was in embrace of the Earth like this. It was when I was a little one and had fallen flat while learning how to fly. I couldn’t but wonder how similar old age is to being a baby

I was woken up when I heard someone call my name. I dismissed that as a hallucination. But there was someone..

A gentle face was bending over me. It had grace, aura and a royal lineage. As he looked at me, the sun seem to align behind him and ensure a halo worthy of his countenance. A lone tear welled up in his eye.

My eyes lit up. I knew who he was …

Dear brave and noble Jataayu..” he said as he lifted me to his lap aided by his younger brother Lakshman….

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Madhu Rao

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  • Megha
    Now that was something....never knew it would end this ...historical :)
    Very nice.Like it :)
  • M. PREETHA
    Wonderful story about Jatayu.
    Work From Home India
  • caluri
    Very beautiful piece !
  • Madhu Rao
    Thank you Prashansa & Raj :-)
  • prashansa puranik
    Nice story Madhu.I didn't imagine the bird to be Jatayu till end!Very good description from the view of the bird.
  • raj
    great post!!
    liked the ending.
  • Madhu Rao
    @Neha,
    I did check it out and like I said there touche & Thank you :-)

    Just blog-rolled you..

    @Karthik,
    It reminded Tuppence of Jonathan Seagull as well :-) . It has been eons since I read ; must re-read. Thank you for the kind words, appreciate it.

    Just blog-rolled you..
  • The first paragraph somehow reminded me of Jonathan Livingston Seagull, only to realize later on that it was something different and maybe better! The ending was magnificent. Never once did I imagine you were telling the tale of Jataayu. Beautifully narrated.
    .-= Karthik´s last blog : ..Hunch - A Short Story =-.
  • I like your modesty Madhu..and read my latest tag post...you will get the answer for your comment as point no. 4 of honest scrap tag :)
    .-= Neha´s last blog : ..Tag-o-mania =-.
  • Madhu Rao
    M/s Lawyer(Neha), just because you are not under oath does not mean you can lie :-), I have read some compelling posts between your two blogs. So I'd like to respectfully disagree your honor !

    I'm glad you like this piece..
  • this is an awesome post Madhu...loved the narration..wish I could even come 10% close to this...fantabulous..
    .-= Neha´s last blog ..Tag-o-mania =-.
  • Madhu Rao
    @Deeps,
    Thank you. I had hoped to start this as any contemporary bird conservation story told by the victim and add a dash of twist at the end... :-). I'm glad it worked for you like Guria above..
  • Madhu Rao
    @Guria,
    I'm honoured that you haunt our site :-) . Please do. Let us know if you need anything to make yourself at home ! I'm happy you like this piece.
  • Outstanding,Madhu! A Heart wrenching story! Till the last line I didnt realize this was Jatayu's story. It seemed as relevant to the present scenario.
    .-= Deeps´s last blog ..At your (in)convenience =-.
  • Oh, I already haunt this place(doesn't it feel spooky at night??)... I read this almost the moment you posted, and was inwardly marvelling at your narration. Imagination is amazing but with your description I was not seeing words/letters but the dry, dusty summer day unfurling! A lot of times people try to guess what happened at the end while reading, here, not only there was any chance getting it right, but your story didn't even allow anyone to contemplate that... You are an amazing writer!
    .-= Guria´s last blog ..Another Perspective: If I were A Baby Again... =-.
  • Madhu Rao
    @IHM,
    Thank you.
  • Madhu Rao
    @Tuppence,
    Thanks ! Jonanthan Seagull -- that 70s classic. I remember reading it a long time ago (early 90s) and meandering into Norman Vincent Peale's positive thinking circa that time. Ah, good times :-)
  • Extremely well written post, Madhu.
    Was touched. I recollected Jonanthan Seagull while reading your post. Coincidentally, I have been reading Seagull since yesterday for the second time.

    Simply loved your post and your style of writing.
    .-= Tuppence´s last blog ..Relationships - Part 8 - The "Inanimate" relationships =-.
  • Hi madhu :)
    ""As I lay in embrace of the Earth, the primal colors of my land kept me company — the red of the baked Earth that contrasted with the pristine blue sky and the greenery of a lush forest on the horizon.""
    *Claps Claps*
    These lines were beautifully penned down !!
    Jatayu of Ramayan!
    Awesome madhu!
    Keep writing!
    .-= Shruti´s last blog ..55 Fiction - #22 =-.
  • Madhu Rao
    Thanks a lot Shruthi . Appreciate it :-)
  • I liked how you described the struggle, the pain and the feelings... never had given much thought to this scene before!!
    .-= indianhomemaker´s last blog ..Ruchi’s husband may not like to live in a Joint Family. =-.
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